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This weekend my family went camping near the river. We set up a tent and my dad make a fire. I helped him to find woods. At night we see many stars and I count more than one hundred. My little sister was scared of the dark, so I hold her hand until she sleep. In the morning it was cold so we drink hot chocolate. I love camping and I want to go again in summer.
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